Your Karma Pays You Back Soon!

Here's a short story of how your karma will pay you back sooner. So Always try to keep it simple silly!

"He left her on a rainy day

He never saw her tears!"

Present Day:

She has beautiful eyes

People compliment her not knowing how much pain and suffering her eyes have endured

Rewinding the Past:

Her eyes met his

His eyes met hers

Their heart beats synced

Cupid strike and Love Blossomed

They were deeply into each other

Unaware of the future

Family Reprimanded

Society Warned

Yet they faced the storm and hurdles together

Their love stayed strong and the trust lasted longer

Not knowing when they can take it to another level

She was his support

He was the whole world to her

And their love was epic for many years

One day Suddenly, they lost touch with each other

Unknown and Unaware of the mighty storm along with a three letter word "EGO" had the strength to break a twelve letter word "RELATIONSHIP" of so many years

He bid her the last GOODBYE on a rainy day

He never saw her tears

She bade the last GOODBYE KISS to her WHOLE WORLD OF JOY

The storm parted their ways

He got himself a pretty looking wife

She was left alone, aloof, lonely, dejected, sad, depressed, derailed

Breathing yet dead inside

Her burning soul had no clue what to do next!

Her best friends supported her by lighting the died out flame inside her

She thought herself to be a loner

But in reality, her CREATOR- GOD was with her

She cried her heart out

Replaced her painful tears through night into her smiling face at day

Realized too much love, care and trust broke her heart

Braced herself up to face her emotional struggles and hardships

Determined to achieve something worthy for herself

She didn't fail but learned a lesson so tough

She smiled to ward off her sadness

And embraced herself on the mission to love herself and spread love across the dejected ones

Her smile and positive vibes won her many admirers

Her innocence and childishness won her the priceless friendships of small kids

She realized herself as a precious creation of the Almighty to spread her wings of joy, love, and happiness across the world

Fast Forward to Present Day:

She has beautiful eyes

People compliment her not knowing how much pain and suffering her eyes have endured

Along this journey, her soul re-energized and awakened to a precious wisdom knowing herself

She forgave her sinner and moved on with grace up until

He approached her 

Trying to grab her attention again on her journey by crossing in front of her vehicle 

Her response to Him, "Dude, I don't drink and drive or speed my car to lose control over it and leave the road or climb on people over the footpath!" :P :D

She's no longer the person

He once knew

For He was the one who left her alone to suffer the pain of a broken relationship

She learned her lesson the tough way 

Though initially, She could not see beyond the darkness,

But when She was guided by her friends and family

All She realized was Her problems left her alone

She was indeed left with many precious things- her happiness, soul, family, friends, freedom, dignity, self-confidence, respect and goal

She was left with whom she called her great friends with blossoming heart inside

They called her the winner of many ups and downs

And the ever devastating hurdles of life

They encouraged her saying 

She has the power within her to change the world

So she did a great job and made it possible

Like the morning sunshine, She shined bright after the dark night

Thus She lived happily ever after

Author's Note

Thank you for reading!
I am an amateur writer, so expecting your honest reviews, advises and criticism.

Reviews

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Wow, so nice dear. So engaging this write, I lked it very much. The flow of the story, past, present and then rewind and fast forward, really wonderful. Best line was he did not see her tear and not driving drinking.... That stanza. Awesome.... Keep writing... Xo

[Anjali]

Thanks a lot for liking it!

[barleygirl]

I love the way you tell this story without trying to do anything tricky . . . just a simple straightforward story that shows us the values you want to impart to your readers. We get the sense of time passing & life moving thru stages, your characters live & learn. I prefer this to the modern published books where a story jumps forward & backward & forward & backward for 300 pages. Just tell the damn story & don't show off by doing tricky timelines. This is what I love about your story. When you trust your material, when you trust that the story is compelling, a writer does not need to do tricky stuff to keep the reader interested. This is the deep-down beauty of a story like this. Well-chosen visuals, too! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Swetha]

Excellent work with full of emotions. Really enjoyed it...

[Anjali]

Thank you again for your appreciation.

[AYVID N]

Great visuals. Good emotional content. Your style is elaborate and expressive. I appreciate that.

[Anjali]

Thank you Divya for your review- means a lot to me.

[Hope]

It was a beautiful read Anjali:)
A positive one and the pictures added a bit of magic to the entire read!
Great work dear!

[Anjali]

Thank you Neetha :)

[Hope]

My pleasure

[Surya]

Can I say a word, wowwow....It's simply touched me, the message she raised after her struggle, That hitted me .....
everyone faces struggle and there are many who cheat us, but that's how we learn rite,....My friend I loved your write...:)

[Anjali]

Thank you Surya for your review!

[Hi]

A solid simply told story. I think this is a good one to leave alone as an example of that. If you wanted though you could dive a bit more into when you said "Suddenly". Much of the time stories like this are not a "One day Suddenly", type of thing, but are more complicated than that. There is probably a story in itself that could begin there. But if you're goal was to use hyperbole than that is different. Thanks for sharing.

[Anjali]

Thank you Matt for you reviews :)

[Chris Yip]

Beautiful narrative poetry like short story. A reader can appreciate the struggles of the protagonist and her pain n suffering as this is so true in life. Well written n draws the reader right to the end. Well done especially with the pics. Continue writing for you have potential and your grammar will get better n better.

[Anjali]

Thank you for Chris for taking time to read the story :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

This was engaging and beautiful.......
a condensed biography of an extraordinary life, filled with the rainbow of emotions........ending on an important life lesson!
very well done.....
i really liked it!
:)

[Anjali]

Thank you so much Pushkar for taking time to go through my story :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork gave life and journey to your poetry. I enjoyed the journey with you into love flames and into love burn away. I like the ending. We do learn one day. Love is just a part of life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and welcome. You are a talented writer.
Coyote

[Anjali]

You really made my day Coyote... Thank you for stopping by to read my story and enjoying the journey :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved your work and you are welcome.