EARLY BEGINNING

EARLY BEGINNING

A Poem by anime

THE CRISPNESS OF THE SUN

TOUCHES THE FROZEN SURFACE OF MY SKIN

CLASHINF DFFECTS OF FIRE AND ICE

TRANSFORM TO A WONDEROUS TWISTER

CAPTURED THROUGH THE SIEGE

EXPLORING THE ENDS

PERPLEXED IMAGERY AT EVERY ABSTRACT BISION

BREATHELESS FOR THE GRASP

OUT OF REACHING DISTANCE

LOCKED SECURELY

WHERE IT CAN BE KEPT HIDDEN

AND ULTIMATELY SACRED

FROM A WORLD SHATTERED IN A BROKEN GLASS

© 2009 anime


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Your vivid descriptions create a beautiful imagery in my head. I love the way you wrote it with pure descriptions as if one is looking through a picture.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 13 Years Ago


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