The City

A collection of Haiku

 

Night lights scintillate;

painting with euphoria

dark masterpieces.

 

There is no escape

when the façade is at work;

artful submission.

 

Morning comes with haze;

mind-fog muddies temptation

until the sun dies.

Reviews

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Mm, yeah, I like these. I should take an advanced vocabulary class, so that I can create more intricate haikus like these. Mine are kind of simplistic compared to yours. I do like the first one the best, it paints a very vivid picture.
I would LOVE to see what you can do with haikus that concern the country. I think you would create masterpieces so beautiful, it would make me die just to read them. In a good way of course. =)

[Fran Marie]

Night lights scintillate;
painting with euphoria
dark masterpieces.

A wonderful set of Haiku~ so beautifully crafted

and well penned my friend~ Fran Marie