Pretending To Love.

Is it pain or love that I feel,
Is it exploding my senses?
Or making me numb.
Do i desire to make it leave,
Or keep it until i'm done.

Will you take your share in this?
Or lie to me like you always did.
Love, love, love! Pretending makes you weak

I see it in your eyes,
I hear it in your voice.

What scares you more my king?
My evermore eternal love for you,
Or the truth that yours is fading?

Reviews

[Mayank]

love is more like a time, it creates a moment and then it flies.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Nice way to define the feelings of love!

[audrie]

This shows so much courage while a relationship is breaking up. I like the way you are sort if calling this person out on their feelings - not letting his or her feelings get turned around on you. . . good read

[Aguilar]

Interesting poem I like it :)