Friendship

Why a girl and guy cannot stay best friends.

Don't you think that I Refer to her, and she refers to me?
Is it our wrong being Boy and a girl ?
Can't a boy and girl be friends?
Do we need to part ways to satisfy others?
We have been together, dreamt together.
If we have to live seperately, then why is this relationship?
Forcing us to get married and live together is ruthless.
Is there any relationship between the bird and tree?
Is it wrong to build nest in it.?
Is there no friendship between bank and river, is it possible to describe it ?
If there is no image to appear to your eyes, will you defy the soul that keeps you alive?
If there is no sound to listen, will you defy the heartbeats that Keeps you alive?
If there is no word to express your feelings, does it mean such silence is not worthy enough?
Tide touches the shore now and then, is it fair to restrict them?
Don't you think I refer to her, and she refers to me..

Anish Gowda

Author's Note

Please let me know your reviews..

Reviews

[Jolan H]

Beautiful what I like is how you compare your subject to things and ask if we should judge that for being. This poem is gem

[m3lody mae]

so many thoughts go through, such an intriguing write here.
I really liked the last 7 lines so much. so nicely written and thought out

[Anish Gowda]

Thank you so very much Dalton. It's long time I wrote this, thoughts arrived after I personally went through such experience.

[Riddhi]

I really liked your entire poem and the way you expressed your entire idea was just brilliant..I especially liked your last 3 to 4 lines..You really have a great potential as a writer..I really liked the way you carved your idea in beautiful words and lines...
KEEP ON WRITING..
Riddhi

[Anish Gowda]

Im really so thankful for your constructive views. It just motivates me to write more. Thank you so much dear Riddhi for the review.

[Najam Us Saher]

What a lovely thought. Enjoyed reading the descriptive heart touching words, beautifully written.

[Anish Gowda]

Thanks a lot for your feedback. You all motivate me to further do well 😊😊

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[April Blue]

I like the description in the poem, you make a very good point ...

[Anish Gowda]

Thank you so much for your reviews coyote poetry.. Thank you so much 😊😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe love cannot be stopped.
"Can't a boy and girl be friends?
Do we need to part ways to satisfy others?
We have been together, dreamt together.
If we have to live seperately, then why is this relationship?"
Great friends can become more if they desire. But. Will be different. Thank you Anish for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Anish Gowda]

Thank you for your review tahsin.. 😊😊😊

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And thanks for your review instead comments on my review! :)

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The only thing that defines relations is the situation at that time......
None has seen tomorrows but stuck with yesterdays.... But the points you described is wonderful!!

[Anish Gowda]

Thanks a lot. Definitely I agree, if someone was in relationship earlier, it would be difficult 😊😊