Daddy...it hurts

i just read it somewhere and i was al :O

My name is Chris, 

I am three, 

My eyes are swollen.. 

I cannot see. 

I must be stupid, 

I must be bad, 

What else could have made, 

My daddy so mad? 

I wish I were better, 

I wish I weren't ugly, 

Then maybe my mommy, 

Would still want to hug me 

I can't do a wrong, 

I can't speak at all, 

Or else I'm locked up, 

All day long 

When I'm awake, 

I'm all alone, 

The house is dark, 

My folks aren't home 

When my mommy does come home, 

I'll try and be nice, 

So maybe I'll just get, 

One whipping tonight 

I just heard a car, 

My daddy is back, 

From Charlie's bar 

I hear him curse, 

My name is called, 

I press myself, 

Against the wall 

I try to hide, 

From his evil eyes, 

I'm so afraid now, 

I'm starting to cry 

He finds me weeping, 

Calls me ugly words, 

He says its my fault, 

He suffers at work 

He slaps and hits me, 

And yells at me more, 

I finally get free, 

And run to the door 

He's already locked it, 

And I start to bawl, 

He takes me and throws me, 

Against the hard wall 

'I'm sorry!', I scream, 

But it's now much to late, 

His face has been twisted, 

Into a unimaginable shape 

The hurt and the pain, 

Again and again, 

Oh please God, 

have mercy! 

Oh please let it end 

And he finally stops, 

And heads for the door, 

While I lay there motionless, 

Sprawled on the floor 

My name is Chris, 

I am three, 

Tonight my daddy, 

Murdered me 

Author's Note

not mine...i'm just sharing. it goes on but its just about passing the poem on.

Reviews

[Bare Trees]

I remember reading this before, awesome piece of poetry. Deserves 100/100

[~m Y s T i C~]

oh my god~

wat was that ?

im scared a little freaked and reeaaalllly sad~

[Reaper]

very drama filled and strong emotion.

[anne98]

that almost felt like something real and sorta made me scared a bit. written with so much drama and fear. another great porm by an amazing poet.

[Leslie Philibert]

Very brutal and hard poem,but you are courageous enough to look at a very tough subject,looking at child abuse from the standpoint of a kid.Did someone you know write it ?

[May]

ohmygodviolent