Kill Her Now

based on a quote i wrote...hehehe

Pick up the gun
Aim for the leg
Make her bleed
Make her Suffer

Grasp the Knife
Slit her throat
Agonizingly Slow
Knowing no mercy

Tie the rope
Drop her Fast
Break her neck
Watch the hanging body float

Push her off
Watch her fall
Watch her crash
See her lifeless body lie

Take the axe
One swift move
Watch her head roll
Stare at the horror on her face


Imagining this was real,

I smile in delight

Author's Note

just different ways of killing someone X3 felt a little psychotic today

Reviews

[Dezzyray]

thank you lots!! oopsie doodles i gotta fix that, thanks for telling mee :3

[emma]

words cannot express how much i loved the simple gore and death of this poem. wow, that sounded incredibly sadistic and insane. oh well. i thought it was amazing, the stanzas flowed into each other nicely, and every line was perfect. just enough blood and gore to get me to the next way of murder. the one and only critique i have to offer is in Stanza #3, line 3, the word "brake" would be spelled "break." but other than that, there is absolutely nothing wrong with this. to me anyways. it was lovely in a dark and deadly way. okay, i'm rambling now, so i'll leave you with this and a promise that this shall be put directly in my favourites.