Split Second

Split Second

A Poem by Dezzyray
"

do the lalalalalalalalala.....la

"
Smiling like nothing's wrong
Laughing like I'm having fun
Pretending like I belong
Wishing this day had not begun



© 2011 Dezzyray


Author's Note

Dezzyray
i don't really know why i rhymed in this one coz i just write stuff down and i made this short coz i was just playing with it

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I like this one as well, I just can't help but feel that perhaps it would flow better if per say you were to take out the "-ing" from the word in the beginning of each line. Nonetheless, it was still quite good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


it was an amazing poem because so many think this in their head.. it sucks to have problems and no one that understands to help and you have to act like it never existed.. really enjoyed reading.. great write

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 2, 2011
Last Updated on December 4, 2011
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Dezzyray
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i am usually a happy person but my poems give a different impression so it's a bit confusing :3 i might still have to tell the people on my old account about my new one though. i will sometimes write .. more..

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