Fly Away

this was from a while ago but it was unfinished :3

Fly away

far from sorrow

Fly away

to see above tomorrow

Fly away

faster than sun's light

Fly away

where there is no night

Fly away

to love and smiles

Fly away

never will we here those voices of denial

Fly away

where we will be full of joy

Fly away
to a place where we won't feel like someone's toy
Fly away
to truth and life

Fly away
where we won't want to grasp the knife
Fly away

never feeling hurt
Fly away
where we won't feel we have to revert
Fly away
to a place full of imagination
Fly away
where everything is our own creation

Fly away
where every melody is a different tune

Fly away,
hold on, i'm coming soon

Reviews

[WhiteWillow]

Very nice, especially liked the ending. One question: Did you intentionally write "here," rather than "hear?" Either way, nice write!

[Yellow Butterfly]

I like how you have structured this poem and how it flows beautiully from top to bottom works so well.

Well done :o)

[Lesley]

BRAVO!!