Questionable Dream

Questionable Dream

A Poem by Dezzyray
"

bloop bloop. another dream of mine

"
Locked in this white empty room
No door, window
feeling trapped for no reason

I look down in fear
and i see a writing on the floor
"your only way out is to answer my riddle"
below in neon colours, it read...

"I am always remembered so vague,
I am with you you like the plague.
I can be the thing that makes you scream,
or i can make you feel so supreme.
But all that doesn't matter.
What am i?"

I reread the words again and again
But after a few minutes i knew the what the answer was
i whispered aloud,

"Dream"

and once i muttered that word
everything suddenly shattered before my eyes
like my entire world had broken beyond repair
i fell into the darkness of desperation
my heart pounding out of my chest
i was so confused and scared

Was i wrong?

Suddenly,
i awoke...

© 2011 Dezzyray


Author's Note

Dezzyray
this freaked me out coz i woke up at night so i thought it was real life XP don't laugh at meh

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Hold on what was the answer to the riddle?!

This was very well written!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was amazing ...i could sense the fear and picture what she went through... and this was all based on a dream that is unbelievable also it sounds more like a nightmare to me...

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow this is really good! Loved it :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


Brilliant piece of work.... liking the riddle in the middle and the suspense at the end!

When we dream, the subconscious mind takes over and nothing makes sense and our dreams are out of our control!

Posted 12 Years Ago


ohmygoodness this was awesome! and it was based on a dream?! musta been freaky. i liked how you hid the word, and i was all nervous you hadn't written anything and would leave me hanging, but then i found it! yay! anyways, this was superb. i loved it:) (i wish my dreams were more like this...) :P

Posted 12 Years Ago



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i am usually a happy person but my poems give a different impression so it's a bit confusing :3 i might still have to tell the people on my old account about my new one though. i will sometimes write .. more..

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