Invisible

Invisible

A Poem by Dezzyray
"

sigh i don't think this makes sense

"
Seemingly gentle
as they say
The nicest ghost
ever known
Craving a second chance
every moment
To show
uncertainty
Quiet with people
i don't know
Eccentric with people
who is known so dearly
Crawling slowing
out of the shell of loneliness
The story goes on
til everyone is shocked
Has no ending
since this makes no sense

© 2011 Dezzyray


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you enjoy writing invisibly, don't you? its clever.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think it makes perfect sense! The ink is before it's gotten bold enough to come out of it's invisibility and into the light of day. Kinda like someone who's really shy.

Great way to post that ink!

Aaron

Posted 13 Years Ago


It has no poem so I cant really say that much. I love the out of the box thinking, literally invisible.

Posted 13 Years Ago


hey i found it, very nice way of writing this piece! i should try to write like this onetime ^U^

Posted 13 Years Ago


"Has no ending since this makes no sense"

Genius concept. The title not only puts emphasis on the look of the poem, but the actual content as well. And for those who can't figure it out, it's their loss.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i don't see a poem so yeah...not sure if it makes sense

Posted 13 Years Ago


uhmm i dont think it does either i dont see a poem ??? :s

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 5, 2011
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Dezzyray
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i am usually a happy person but my poems give a different impression so it's a bit confusing :3 i might still have to tell the people on my old account about my new one though. i will sometimes write .. more..

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