Pick me up

Pick me up

A Poem by Thisismythearpy
"

A true story. Very short

"
You said pick me up when I fall
I picked you up
You pushed me down

© 2017 Thisismythearpy


Author's Note

Thisismythearpy
Any way to make it better? I don't like it.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register



Reviews

It doesn't need to be wordy to be complete. I like that these few words describe an entire relationship. I say, leave it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe
Flag Flag Writing


Stats

81 Views
1 Review
Added on June 24, 2017
Last Updated on June 24, 2017
Tags: lost love, breakup

Author

Thisismythearpy
Thisismythearpy

Kingston, TN



About
Hello, my name is Chris. I just post the stuff I wrote in my notebook when I ran away home a little while ago when trying to run away from depression, ptsd, and what all caused it all. I'm dead inside.. more..

Writing
[more writing]


Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

Advertise Here