Freezing

Freezing

A Poem by Thisismythearpy
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My sun is gone

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Life drained from my eyes

Darkness in my skies 


My sun is gone

Please don’t take to long


I am freezing 

© 2017 Thisismythearpy


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Please don't take too long...that one line provides the almost lost hope the reader wishes for the author. It's brevity is like the hidden facet of a jewel that can only be seen with a jeweler's eye. A brief spark, almost missed. Very good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Thisismythearpy
Thisismythearpy

Kingston, TN



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Hello, my name is Chris. I just post the stuff I wrote in my notebook when I ran away home a little while ago when trying to run away from depression, ptsd, and what all caused it all. I'm dead inside.. more..

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