The new moon

It is short, and supposed to be funny. Sorry if it isn't. I tried!

Looking at the sky

I see something caught my eye

Looking up a head

As what I hoped was a star

Looking to make a wish

Though it seemed so far

It came closer, the red light

I looked at it with amazement

Tell I seem the two cheeks

Red and large

I stared in discuses

Welcome the moon

Growing larger and larger

I truly hope it doesn’t rain

Reviews

[What happened to simple..]

you brought a little hope to this one, btw, I read somewhere today that if you smile, your body thinks you're happy, =p try it, keep smiling and get out there, make life what you truly want, no one can stop you unless you let them. It's not how you're brought up, hell no one owes anyone anything, really.. Guess you can only owe what you want to yourself. Best of luck dude

[Misled Legend]

I liked it for some reason. I hope things get better for you.

[The True Angel Of Sin]

sorry

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Urm...well, at least you tried...