Curse of the bloody bell

i have a curse on my soul that wont let it rest i call it the curse of the bloody bell... i was out in the field one day and when i got home i found my wife and daughter laying in pools of their own blood i swore over my wife and daughters bodies that i would kill the man did this to them

Author's Note

I haven't finished writing this one yet

Reviews

[zaisham9393]

I agree with GPR..a good start for a story.best of luck ::)

[Angilioth]

yeah this could be a story but its not well not yet anyway this is actually lyrics

[GPR]

This was a really great start, however there is one mistake that I noticed. In the second line it should be "and", not "snd". But other than that, it was really great and I can't wait to read it when it's done :)

[Angilioth]

yeah this could be a story but its not well not yet anyway this is actually lyrics