The Tiger's Cage

my love is like a tiger trapped in a cage that is in a deep dark hole with no way of escape just waiting to be released once more to roam free its just waiting for the one who holds the key the tiger wishes to be free so he gnaws at the bar that holds him back with a fiery passion wanting to run the lands as fast as he can but the bars dont break his gums and teeth hurt but he continues any way wanting to see his love once more drives him to continue

Reviews

[ANTO]

I always found it very sad seeing magnificent beasts pacing those cages. Their eyes dulled by captivity yet just below the surface there's still that energy there. I enjoyed this (as a Leo - I my be predisposed to anything like this). I was intrigued by the format and style. I only felt it hindered my enjoyment once - at this point (due to the ambiguity)
- "...but the bars don't break his gums and teeth hurt..."

Nicely done Angilioth. :)

[Angilioth]

yeah it was styled to be lyrics for a song but it just doesnt really fit the format of poetry lol

[ANTO]

I can hear it - the opening line is a smasher. dear poet. :)

[Angilioth]

most of my poems are lyrics so just keep that in mind lol. I have also written a story