Master of the Mask

The master of the mask He hides behind Those pretty blue eyes That flawless disguise Never unleashes the storm inside He fights a losing battle He's losing the war He tries to forget the girl he adored But no one sees that he has broken down And the master of the mask is no more

Reviews

[Dante Yurei]

Ohh very cool. I like the story in it, how he tries to hide behind a mask but find out it just isn't enough; he can't hide from himself. It had good rythm and was entertaining. Good job!

[Joe]

This is a really good poem. Great rhythm and word choice helps it flow very nicely. Great job! Keep it up!