Black

What the color means to me

Black, the color of the middle of my heart, burned into my soul. Can you see it? Have you noticed. The feeling is being pushed into a pit, people around laugh at you, no help is welcomed. The only contact I know is betrayal. Help. HELP. screams erupt, unheard.

Author's Note

The feeling of black, I've felt it and it hurts. Don't be a bully, be a hero and make a story. Your own story

Reviews

[Chris Micha]

Black is my favorite color and so is my heart. I was bullied as a kid but I used it to my advantage. I probably wouldn't change it if I could, it made me who I am. Hold your head up and never look down...you deserve that!

[Angels heart]

Black is my second favorite color, maybe the color of my soul O.o I will and thank you.

[SonOfPlunder]

Dark, foreboding and desperate. I like this, good job

[Angels heart]

Thank you for your feelings

[Chidoriflower]

Blackness....the absence of light. It's helplessness. It's a terrible hole....one of complete isolation and despair. You could make an entire story on only a few sentences. Interesting. :)

[Angels heart]

Thank you, life is a story, you just have to summarize the parts of it. Always looking forward to your review ;)

[Chidoriflower]

I wish this life of mine wouldn't end; that there'd be another series. You're welcome and thanks. ;)

[Angels heart]

Death is hard to some people, welcoming to others. Everyone wants to live long and happily.

[Chidoriflower]

Yeah.......