Fallen Angel

An Angel's wings turns black with sin and is locked up forever in a dungeon down in hell.

Black feather fall around me,
Please someone save me.
I scream,
But no words come out.
Chains hold, locked in place,
Please someone call my name.
I pull and pull and pull,
Bug that only makes it hold tighter.
Red rolls down my wrist to my hands.
"What is this?" I think.
The feeling of pain rolls through me.
Suddenly red is all around me,
No stopping it now.
I look around,
But there is nothing to see,
Just me in my chains.
The feathers that have fallen,
Have been stained with red.
I reach out grabbing the last black.
It looks like its in pain and is sad.
A reflation passes through it,
Into I
I grab,
I pull back,
I stab forward.
More red,
More pain,
More feel.
Red leaks around me,
But I do not care,
For I now can sleep.

Author's Note

In my version of heaven, fallen angels can die and when they do they turn into the air/wind, or maybe you should make up your own poem/story if what happens to a fallen Angel after it dies and tell me. I will be glad to read it ;)

Reviews

[Chris Micha]

Us fallen angels get it rough sometime...sigh. Great job my lady!

[Angels heart]

Hey, at least you get to see both sides, fallen Angel ;) thank you, great sir

[Blissful Sin]

wow this is so interesting. very visual and emotional. nice work:)

[Angels heart]

Thank you so much for your review. I try my best ;)

[Dark Princess]

Wow. This is different (completely in a good way). In a way it seems to have a disconnected pain to it. Amazing.

[Angels heart]

Good, I want to be different ;) thanks for the review

[Dark Princess]

Different is defiantly better than normal.

[Angels heart]

You got that right ;p xD

[Chidoriflower]

This is brilliant. I've always liked angels and demons and the like (note the Sebby profile picture.) Bravo, angel's heart! :)

[Angels heart]

Not to toot my own horn but, a toot toot. I have also had a great like to angels, god, demons, and devils (love the black butler pic.) thanks so much for the review and I will be looking forward to more ;)

[Chidoriflower]

Lol. I will not disappoint. ;)

[Angels heart]

Never ever have you EVER