Don't say anything...

Don't say anything, true love doesn't look for a big words
Look and touch of your hand male is for enough me
To I can read what comes from your heart.
Joined us deliberately fate and gave us
law tosate the heavenly joy luck.
Don't say anything, I know everything I don't wish
to hide from the world who you are for me.
Today, when I was in the garden, I was looking at the roses
they are best able to talk about love.
Stunning color and sweet smell gave me
thought how beautiful must be our
hearts united in a single twitch.
You are my happiness, I hidden you somewhere
at the bottom of my soul to the relevant
time get carried away, and how swollen water
flowing in your arms reaching the goal.
Impulsive love and true love 
how very happy and true.
Don't say anything, true love
They aren't looking for big words, but when
sunny morning you wake up and smile
on the lips of your heart inasmuch tell me "my angel".

Reviews

[LSS]

As I've said before, your poetry has the heart to express clearly what your halting words cannot. I especially loved the symbolism in the lines: "I was looking at the roses,
they are best able to talk about love." How many times have I tried to express words that cannot be said, only shown. Maybe that's why women are so much in love with flower's simple sentences.
Lar

[poetic soul]

truly amazing...the picture added to the impact your words make....every word in there, makes u feel the emotion running thru yo head when you wrote this piece...awesome...

:) Love,
Krishna

[Poeticpiers]

Words are a poor substitute for communication A hug says so much more

[Eagle Cruagh]

True art defies distance and time.

This poem is an exemplar of that
true art. Beautiful, full of love.

Brilliant !

Rated-----100 %

---- Eagle Cruagh

[Magdelena]

I always said actions say more than words can ever do.. In this you showed how true that is.. Wonderful, as is all your pieces. You just make me want more and more..

Mags xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

As in anything especially love actions speak louder then words... a beautifully poetic piece of writing.

[Orlando Murcia]

Very deep in a personal way
heartfelt but not mushy which was
absolutely great

Great job

[MarkGMelvin]

Beautiful

[Charles]

Needs some editing (English as a second language?), but there is definite merit to the metaphors and imagry. I'll be back to read more.