friendship

"For my every rael friends"

 

Friend is the only one
The one which is coming,
When the entire world is diverging!
The one which is helping in the poverty,
for who you have confidence ...
But is he?
it isn't too much
The human is only a human
He isn't God...
He is exaggerating...
by oneself!
He is a creature of imagination...
Friend... isn't giving attempts!
Doubt....
Distraction...
He is human fulfilling!
Friendship...:
isn't a painful fall,
isn't cheating himself.... and you!
So think about it....
DO YOU HAVE A FRIEND LIKE THIS?
Because the friendship is often only... desire....

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Not in my case babe i am deadly serious if i want to be with that special girl or lady in my life.
The poem is outstanding and once again you have shown all of the folk on this site how to write a brilliant poem even when you are handicapped by the fact english isn't your natural tongue,well done.
I love the use of words and references about man being humble and ordinary he is not god but many humans mistake the fact that they are mere mortals and time is short on earth.

[Tony]

The friends I have I can count on the fingers of one hand. My acquaintances number in the hundreds.
This poem hold clues to the difference.
Well done.
There are a couple of distracting grammar errors here you could fix.

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

The heart looks deeper than just words it is the feeling of emotion have you grasped that understanding yet?

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Yes but not many as i tend to work them out and their deceitful nature