friendship

"For my every rael friends"

 

Friend is the only one
The one which is coming,
When the entire world is diverging!
The one which is helping in the poverty,
for who you have confidence ...
But is he?
it isn't too much
The human is only a human
He isn't God...
He is exaggerating...
by oneself!
He is a creature of imagination...
Friend... isn't giving attempts!
Doubt....
Distraction...
He is human fulfilling!
Friendship...:
isn't a painful fall,
isn't cheating himself.... and you!
So think about it....
DO YOU HAVE A FRIEND LIKE THIS?
Because the friendship is often only... desire....

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Not in my case babe i am deadly serious if i want to be with that special girl or lady in my life.
The poem is outstanding and once again you have shown all of the folk on this site how to write a brilliant poem even when you are handicapped by the fact english isn't your natural tongue,well done.
I love the use of words and references about man being humble and ordinary he is not god but many humans mistake the fact that they are mere mortals and time is short on earth.

[Racy Daniel]

This is a so loving poem on friendship. This poem is appropriate on this special friendship day.

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful contrast to see the depth of friendship, but also the fraility. This is wonderfully insightful and profound. Thank you for your friendship...

[Tina Kline]

What a beautiful poem on friendship. Sometimes friendships are all we have but no one is perfect. We have to have the power to forgive, because if we can't, then there really was no friendship.

Excellent write!

[Christopher.Holmberg]

:) EXCELLENT i like this.
A beautiful poem from a beautiful girl :)
A+

[words_of_rain]

I completely understand!

[cest la vie]

Jola,
what a beautiful poem on friendship. Friends are so important to our lives. You have written about this in a wonderful way. Thank you for sharing this piece with us all.
Lynne

[Kevin Chelsea]

"The human is only a human"

I like this. Seems like everybody forget this little fact once in a while. People are allowed to make mistakes. A stranger would only observe, a friend would forgive.

[Mark]

Some beautiful sentiments, Jola! Keep up the good work!

[Tony]

...But it he..... should be: but is he?
Friend is only one, should be: Friend is the only one?
Maybe I'm out to breakfast here....correct me if I wrong.
Oh, I know you will!