Prayer...

MY PRAYER....

I know that you love me,

I know that you understand me,

I know that at one time you will wipe every my tear,

I know that to me you are saying how most nice you can with singing of birds' voices, with noise of old trees.

You know you you know my thoughts you know my failings decisions which are lacking the power if sadness then again appears in my life

I will whisper... you help you will answer... so to give you

I can you apart from my love everything what exists for you lasts the thanks you teach me your patience every day forgiving guilts forgiving the evil about you if you can przyjm my begging this way at one time

I would want close you to be a day will come when my life becomes the dream let my soul live in your world....

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This was so sweet and heartfelt.. it came out feeling so spiritual.. such great regard and yearning to live in this other world.. at first I truly felt that most pointed towards afterlife.. but then saying you are willing to forgive the evil ways about them.. in exchange for patience.. now this truly felt that way but as a metaphor could be the yearning of a high love as well.. I loved the message either way! Praying for salvation through a higher power or just loving another.. both are beautiful.. I could definitely feel sincere wishes here.. thank you for sharing! =)

[Jola]

thx for opinions :)