Maybe it is just you...

Maybe it is just you...

A Poem by Naomi Montana Walsh
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This poem is about that kind of person that is never happy with what they have.. at some point you know you can't please them.

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The dress don't fit so you split the seams

now you're naked in your dreams

The shoes are tight so you take them off

Somethings stuck in your throat and it's not just a cough.


Maybe it's you,

that you're running from,

it's a different instrument

not just another drum.


You don't know the lyrics, but you can't just hum.


The Glass is too tall so you spill the drink

The Thought is too big so you don't think.


The bed is made but you can not lie..

The sun is not the only thing in this sky.


The thought sounds false

but I think it's true

maybe , I'm wrong

but maybe it's you.

 

N.WalshMontana

© 2010 Naomi Montana Walsh


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oh yes my friend some just dont know what they want..or just dont know what they have
they maybe blessed with lots ..which in others hands will send them to heaven and be so satisfied
its a blessing to know who you are and how much you size up..and what or where you just fit
othewise you just lose your way..for you never know where you are going so how could you start
i loved those contradictions..the glass maybe too tall but you will spill the drink anyway
your bed is so made but you will never lie..you just dont know what you want or what to do
always liked your wise words put so beautifully
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oh you are right on with this one... a very creative vent I must say describing those never satisfied...

especially these lines...

The Glass is too tall so you spill the drink
The Thought is too big so you don't think.

Why can't people just except who they are and enjoy the life they have.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Well spoke!! How often we accept the blame for other people's short comings!! I know i did for far too long.
Thanks for sharing!!

-kelli

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 2, 2010
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Naomi Montana Walsh
Naomi Montana Walsh

Los Angeles , CA



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I am a writer and Artist .. well actually those are the same thing to me..I like to tell stories with art and I like to make pictures with words ..I live a happy life now but have walked through the v.. more..

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