Why Zombie Why?

This will be my submission for Zombie writing contest

Why Zombie , Why?

What is this talk of Zombie Apocalypse?

Could it possibly be true ..we write haiku for you.

We act dumb and walk slow so you can catch us

our brains are your food. Why Zombie why and how could you?

Be reasonable after we are gone what will you  do?

who will write Zombie Haiku?

Author's Note

Short and sweet.. not much too it but..Zombies are simple folk

Reviews

[alesuriko]

The flow and the rhythm could use some work but the content is really funny. Also, your spacing is a little messed up, you have an extra one between "you" and "do" in the sixth line, an extra one before the comma in the first line, and your ellipses in the third line is also wrong it should be "true... we" for it to actually be an ellipses. Only minor errors but you can always improve. Otherwise, good poem, although I don't understand why you mentioned writing a haiku for the zombies throughout the poem because this poem doesn't have the qualifications to be a haiku. Either way, a relatively cute piece.

[Eric Cox]

Amusing and clever.

[Minnow]

ZOMBIES!!! =) really awsome poem

[deeps]

I like this i thought it was cute really

[Wolfe Greytome]

Short and amusing. Well done.