You Are:

She came to him in silhouette....hands tattooed to his desire....to cascade pleasure from the shelf of want....

A heart's breath away...

 

 

You are...

A rainbow, drifting in waterfall dreams,

Pooling in the night, flowing through me like

Moon transcended rain; riding the wind of longing

Across my waiting skin,

Where time is undone and forever is hushed...

 

 

 

You are...

Here,

In every beat of my heart,

Such is the dream of you, whispered into my thoughts,

Close enough to count your pulse-beats

Against my own;

Melting me where I lay, your breath woven through my hair...

 

 

 

You are...

That gentle soft breath of honey, between wake and sleep,

The never born whisper,

The storm that calls to me..

I hear it...It aches in me; It is mine;

I am as bound to it as a wounded bird, longing to fly...

 

 

 

You are...

One, inside my skin,

The pulse-flow running through my veins;

The shiver that teases,

Sliding to dip in a dance of ecstasy,

Between the thighs of unending night....

 

 

 

You are...

The séance of evening,

Your flesh, mouth and tutor;

A sinful sweat formed upon my lips, soaking words

Imbued with gentle breath...

A tangle of moans, laid bare before you...

 

 

 

You are...

Held close, in the knit of my soul,

The ember-glow that burns, a flame ignited

Within each stroke of your tongue;

I open like a flower, inhale me in your need,

Sip me sweet, nectar splashed...

 

 

 

 

You are...

The tender touch,

The questing mark upon the willing tones of my skin;

Nourishing the enchantment I find, suspended in your arms;

I am here,

As eyes brim, soul-filled to overflow;

Enter me,

Breathe with me, your own... my rise and fall...

Endless....

Together.....

Fulfilled......................

 

Reviews

[AYVID N]

You create the most utterly beautiful and amaing imagery that could be to describe a loved one. This just reflects the eloquent love that you have in your heart. I feel all my senses refresh after reading this.

Thanks Angel for sharing this most lovely writing.

[khalid]

what have you left for reviewers to say? you have already used all the sweetness in this poem. it is really wonderful from all aspects. in words picking that you used the simple suitable words, in the metaphor, you made me feel im looking from the window to a very lovely scene, the music that flows all over the lines and the rhyming. the emotions, that you could express all the senses of love and passion in such a wonderful way...

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy,..]

You are true a romantic. I felt every word of that wondrous journey, my favorite part of you poem was the third stanza,

You are...
That gentle soft breath of honey, between wake and sleep,
The never born whisper,
The storm that calls to me..
I hear it...It aches in me; It is mine;
I am as bound to it as a wounded bird, longing to fly...

"The never born whisper" so much imagery produced from that one line. simply lovely!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there is a romanticism to this..in a physical sense...but i see it more as two people melding spiritually with each other...

such beautiful phrasing...this poem carries us.

jacob

[Frieda P]

Your reads are so romantic and just flow right through me, I'm your new biggest fan! Love this, it's so easy, you put the words together so effortlessly it seems to get a stunner every time! Enchanting read.

You are...
One, inside my skin,
The pulse-flow running through my veins;
The shiver that teases,
Sliding to dip in a dance of ecstasy,
Between the thighs of unending night....

I love it all, but this one really touched me.

[Jack...]

Hey, I thought I was her new biggest fan????

[Frieda P]

We can agree to share her! ;-P

[Frieda P]

Don't be greedy now Jack!

[Jack...]

Ok, I will her old biggest fan.

[Jack...]

Your words wash over me like a gentle wave, pure and sensual.