Find me, enveloped in whispered secrets... feeling the deepest parts of your heart..where...with your fingers searching my pulse we find....more than imagined...so much more...when we tangled into us.
I am Moon-drift, wreathed among shadowed shrouds, Lain in grasses woven with scented perennials, Scattered To the winds of rapture, My sigh Drifting in ephemeral mists, lost in the midnight silk....
I am The hush of an everlasting kiss Remembering; Skin vulnerable to breeze cradling a fragile heart, Wrapped Melting into emerald realms....
I am Flesh-touch, scorched in the blaze of wildness, Trembling; In the breath and lathe upon waiting skin, Surrendered; Burnt in the shimmer-gleam of crimson stain....
I am Unabashed sensual delight, Primal; Shimmering in the haze of heat, Enraptured
In the drown of his tether....
I am The taste of your flesh on lips
Untamed; Fevered, in veins that are lost,
Embraced, As the moon dreams high in darkened silk....
I am Each suckle of skin burgeoned and pliant, Whimpering; Curved, etched wanton, Drifting Salacious in sweet release....
I am Your heart Curled under my breast, Immortalized Adorned in glistening mists of tender-soft The lover that never leaves.......
Oooooft! Now that's what I call poetry! Mother of gawd where do I began? This is so exquisite, it made me gasp for joy. I love every stanza with a passion! It'd be difficult to pick just one, like children, they all have a special quality and can stand alone.
I am
Flesh-touch, scorched in the blaze of wildness,
Trembling;
In the breath and lathe upon waiting skin,
Surrendered;
Burnt in the shimmer-gleam of crimson stain....
Just one out of seven of my favorite verses!! Woo............!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Dear Frieda how I love your earthy tones....you are 'real' and so very warm....your beautiful commen.. read moreDear Frieda how I love your earthy tones....you are 'real' and so very warm....your beautiful comment means so much to me....:)
i loved how you have penned and drawn such an amazing piece of art. it is really wonderful in all the aspects including words picking, metaphor, and the logic consequence of the music coming throughout all the lines..
thank you really for such a wonderful piece..
This is truly amazing I have written a poem 2 years ago with the same name, I will be placing it on here, please read it and tell me what you think.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I thank you sweet man ....and I will look forward to reading your poetry please add it to my review .. read moreI thank you sweet man ....and I will look forward to reading your poetry please add it to my review list :)
Oooooft! Now that's what I call poetry! Mother of gawd where do I began? This is so exquisite, it made me gasp for joy. I love every stanza with a passion! It'd be difficult to pick just one, like children, they all have a special quality and can stand alone.
I am
Flesh-touch, scorched in the blaze of wildness,
Trembling;
In the breath and lathe upon waiting skin,
Surrendered;
Burnt in the shimmer-gleam of crimson stain....
Just one out of seven of my favorite verses!! Woo............!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Dear Frieda how I love your earthy tones....you are 'real' and so very warm....your beautiful commen.. read moreDear Frieda how I love your earthy tones....you are 'real' and so very warm....your beautiful comment means so much to me....:)