Her breath

Her breath

A Poem by AngeloRosell


Heaven is close

When I am silent

What is surreal

When nothing in real

Except for these steps

That guide me forward

Marching through time

Feeling this impulse

Flow through my heart

Heaven is Real

I have felt her presence

© 2016 AngeloRosell


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Starts out with great impact in the first two lines. Frankly, marching forward through liner time is standard and not surreal. Time is not a line, more of an arc. If it exists at all.
I love the concept but it seems to have been dashed off quickly

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on January 10, 2016
Last Updated on January 10, 2016
Tags: Love, Life, Hate, Pain, Light, Heaven

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AngeloRosell
AngeloRosell

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