Mountain Top

Mountain Top

A Poem by AngeloRosell

The liquid trickles on down
Finding refuge upon my scalp
Slowly finding it's way, down my neck
Blood thirsty tears of savages 
Staining my skin, a rustic paint
Rolling down my vertical spine
Reminding who I am
Perpendicular I stand
A mountain has sprouted 
Right from the ground, Mother earth
Towering above the clouds
Connecting earth to the above 
A bridge between gaps
Dreams to reality 
Demons do try, act as a foe
To knock me down with a hard blow
Yet the angels above all know
The brains a vessel , Will at Mind
Constructs a veil glossy and finished
Steers the mind combined with the body
Climbing the mountain all the way
Whispers from angels, telling me to stay
Approaching the top one will see
A large golden gate, open and welcome 
Etched in perfect lettering
Carved by the one himself 
Baring the most sought out word
Desired by all, reached by so few

   Heaven

© 2014 AngeloRosell


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Very well crafted! Good work!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like the flow, beautifully written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I read this as the mountain being belief in Jesus, as there is no entry to this wonderful place called heaven except through belief in Him :) this is beautifully written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem was extremely beautiful! Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece with the world!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I certainly hope there is a heaven, I certainly hope and to believe

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautifully crafted piece Angelo, really enjoyed :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was so beautiful Angelo. Your descriptions are so vivid... I loved it!

100/100 from me.

~Stefanie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The ultimate abode we all cherish:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 4, 2014
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Tags: Love, Poetry, Hope, Faith Life, Heaven, Hell, Struggle, Hate

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