A DreaM

My take on a sleeping Dream . . . .

When your head hits the pillow

The lights go dim

The memories unfold in

Ways of a movie, an

Action star is born

While the projector displays

Subconscious remissions on a 

Blank clean wall 

Reviews

[Brenden Taylor]

A nifty vignette for dreamers. And nice metaphor/image choice. I can just imagine someone laying in bed, cutting off the light, rolling on one side, and then after a few moments, we hear a projector reel start up and two projector beams pierce the dark and land on the far wall.

90.

[Jimmy Angel]

Great poem! Its meaningful contest will surely remain in my mind!

[My Favorite Writer !]

So Good ! I can totally relate to it ! Dreams are part of life..and these dreams make us what we are..

[Fernando Dardón]

wow!!! how clever way to describe unconcious brain activity. And dreams are indeed a kind of a movie.
The most interesting part was the "action star". Who is the actor/actress?
Well, as you say on your profile description, poetry may have lots of interpretations, here is mine:
I see a movie, which scenes are made of memories, and the action stars may be many persons. Subconscious mind interprets real world, and gives us those remissions. Maybe that's why we sometimes dream incoherent things? anyway, they are always a reflex of what we have experienced our hole life. Maybe the black clean wall is the mind, in which the whole "other reality" is masterly constructed.
This poem reminds me the movie "Inception" (exellent movie by the way), 'cause it describes dreams as an alternate reality.

I LIKED IT A LOT!!!