End to misery

This is a poem about a broken heart

My heart is breaking I feel so weak.

It feels like my whole world is collapsing underneath me and that I am heading in a one way street.

I cannot go on living when my one true love is now gone.

My thoughts of suicide is rushing down my body.

Where do I go from here, what can I do as my life is nothing without you.

Im so lost and in so much pain to end it all will be my end of this pain of nothingness, my heart is empty and raw inside.

A knife is cutting me into pieces, I feel dead already in every inch of my body so might as well end it all and put an end to thhis missery.

Here I am as raw as can be take me to the place where I was meant to be

Reviews

[Aphy!]

Beautiful! Moving piece. I could feel the emotion in every line. And it's good to see a fellow South African doing such an amazing job. *New biggest fan*

[Another Mayfly]

This is a very moving piece, you can feel the emotion that you portray so eloquently.

[Damien Thibodeaux]

Your words speak to everyone who has had a broken heart. The reader can identify with these feelings of genuine pain to the core. And that's everything a poet can hope for...to make the reader feel.

[Angelique]

Wow thank you very much for your wonderful words and that is why I love writing poetry is to try and connect with the reader especially as I write about my own situation and things I have been through.

[Damien Thibodeaux]

You're welcome.