Three became one

Three became one

A Poem by Rose Black
"

When your love as no boundries why put boundies where there is none

"

We all walked in a barren land

Me and you

You and me

You and her

Her and me

We thought we were alone

We thought we were too far away

 

But you found her

And then you found me

 

The barren land came to life

Like Eden’s garden

Flowering with every step we took

With every word that draws us together

You found us both

You made us love you

She made me love you even more

And I made her love you even more

 

When we notice

We were no longer three

We were one

One perfect family

One perfect mutual overwhelming love

 

We are One 

© 2014 Rose Black


Author's Note

Rose Black
This is a bit of wishfull thinking ... I'm hoping my fantasy becomes a reality...

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A lovely write, full of romantic warmth. May lasting happiness be yours :) Penny

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Finding one soul mate is a gift. If you have two then may the three of you be blessed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You have rendered me speechless, Rose. This was beyond beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rose Black

10 Years Ago

Thank you .... I think words from the heart allways do =D
Now that is quite an endearing expression of what soul mates should be. Simply lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rose Black

10 Years Ago

Thanks I hope I've found my sould mates...
Rose, this is beautiful. I like the rhythm and feeling behind the stanzas. I like the day-dreaming quality to it; you wrote with your heart. Very nice write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rose Black

10 Years Ago

Thank you =D

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Added on May 13, 2014
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Rose Black
Rose Black

OPorto, North, Portugal



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