Lost

Another sad poem about loss

I have lost me,
that is why I lost you.
Yet all I wanted to do,
was make your dreams come true.
But it wasn't easy,
cause you walked out on me.
Ruining all my dreams.
Cause you was the one thing,
that I truly believed.

Reviews

[PoeticChico]

Such a magnificent piece!
After reading the first two lines I decided I loved the poem already.
It hurst reading it but yet I want to keep reading it.
I'm a fan.
If this is pulled from a personal experience I can only say what a shame & truly sorry.
You are a great poet...

[Anne Davidson-Lamb]

Thank you am so glad you liked it. Yes all that I write is from past experiences. But they have helped form who I am. It's taught me forgiveness and compassion.

[PoeticChico]

Welcome! Wonderful indeed. And I am glad you are such a sweet and kind person because of those experiences.

[Anne Davidson-Lamb]

It's best to be kind. For kindness brings kindness back to you. I have had a few on another writing page that wasn't so kind. But I'm so glad I found this site cause had not wrote in a long time cause of the other site.