To Hold a Heart

A quick poem I made about love

To have a heart

The most precious gift

To let it go

The greatest sin

For a heart to hold

Is special and rare

But you can’t keep two

You have to share

So give your heart

In return of one

And created will be

The sweetest love

And with a ring

A promise made

God’s hands unite

No longer two

But one

Together for life

Because to have a heart

The most precious gift

To give it back

A selfish wish 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think I didn't invest a lot of time into this work so I'm interested in how good or bad you found it.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

It is a lovely write filled with love and lots of reason and encouragement to share it!!

[David Scott]

I liked it until the last line... That did not feel like the end to such an optimistic view of love. Liked the other 99%! :-)
Be well.

[Angelica Marie]

I guess you have a point never really noticed it that way, thanks for the comment :) I will work on it

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful

[Angelica Marie]

Thank YOu :)

[Tate Morgan]

Time has nothing to do with a poems greatness it is most times the feelings stirred and shared

[Angelica Marie]

Very true, thanks