Reaching

Another piece of writing that came as a result of just free thinking.

Reaching

By. The Angelic Starchild

Don't follow me... I'm only human.

Blood and flesh, no god.

Killable, my heart does beat

It stops? Forever I sleep

 

I weep, but don't shed tears

Water is not economically viable

Conserve my tears for the end of all things

Joy or sadness? I guess the world never will know

 

Firm grasp on this planet, no grip on its meaning

Slipping off of precipice of knowledge of all things

Everything is finite, except time

Because it only runs out, it doesn't die.

 

Metamorphosis of my mind

Morphing into something that I don't understand

So I won't attempt to understand and I'll just stand.

Stand!

Reviews

[Alisa Js]

Hello from across land and sea...

This interesting piece reads to me like a work in progress, a first or second draft...

If I might offer a suggestion,it would be to keep working with it....it has great potential...

Alisa💫

[Angelic_Starchild]

Thanks for the feedback Alisa and you couldn't be more right. This is piece like a glass of thoughts that accidentally spilled out without any real direction. I look forward to revisiting this if/when my thoughts permit it.

Thanks for stopping by :)

[Alisa Js]

Anytime 😃