The Best

The Best

A Poem by Devilish_Light
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just bout my best friend :)

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Whenever I cry,
Whenever I smile,
Whenever I laugh,
No matter the mile,
You were here then,
Your here now,
You tell me you always will

When I was young,
As I grow,
When im old,
When i die,
We'll be together,
now and forever

Till time runs out,
With no doubt,
I LOVE YOU TAYLOR.......

© 2010 Devilish_Light


Author's Note

Devilish_Light
Taylor (Kiri) My twin then, now, and forever.......:)

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This is personally about you. I like your personalty and I like the fact that you have the courage to express yourself. This poem shows a lot of love and care for your twin. If I had a twin I would treat them like that too. I can tell this is written from the heart.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is personally about you. I like your personalty and I like the fact that you have the courage to express yourself. This poem shows a lot of love and care for your twin. If I had a twin I would treat them like that too. I can tell this is written from the heart.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww thats awesome wonderful sweet message.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like your simplicity....and I love how you say how you feel with a least words as possible. Very Good!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww!!! I love you too Kiki!! :)

Whenever I cry,
Whenever I smile,
Whenever I laugh,
No matter the mile,
You were here then,
Your here now,
You tell me you always will

Of course I will be there for you forever!! I love how this reads love, it is very sweet and meaningful!! Write more girlie!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww very touching :') cool your a twin? awesome writing. thanks for sharing

Posted 14 Years Ago


Till time runs out,
With no doubt,
I LOVE YOU TAYLOR.......

Precious lines here, this is a sweet write.
Bonds stay tight, like this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 8, 2010
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Devilish_Light
Devilish_Light

Davenport, FL



About
I am Kiki. I love to write! Usually write really dark stories. I am the troubled youth of tomorrow, and the light at the end of your tunnel. I am the new beat you choose to dance to, and the dan.. more..

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