Would anyone Care?

Would anyone Care?

A Poem by ~Angelic~

Would anyone care

If I were to disappear

Would anyone care

If I were to die tonight

Would anyone care

If I suddenly just stop making an effort

Would anyone care

If I was killed

Would anyone care

About this neglected angel?

Would anyone care

That I don't care anymore

Would anyone care

If I welcomed death

Would anyone care

If I willingly wanted to die

Would anyone care?

Or does no one care at all?

© 2009 ~Angelic~


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haha yes! I meant I! ty for that!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like how you repeat the title every other line.
I think in your second line you meant to put "If I were to disappear"
Great poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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~Angelic~
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Well, where to start. I have been given the nickname angel by many people. And because of that, it has stuck with me and I even got a tattoo of it. I do enjoy role playing. It helps bring out the .. more..

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