Broken winged angel

Once full long black wings

Are slowly being crushed

Bended and broken

Turning me

Into this broken winged angel

It hurts to move them

It hurts to even fly

Tears flowing down my eyes

They are broken

They are beaten down

Why?

Why do people

Want to break

An angel's wings?

Why do people

Want to make others

Feel like they are not important?

I offer friendship

Companionship

Loyalty

And I get my wings broken

Just because

This world is so cruel

Well I will no longer try anymore

I will shun everyone away

Lock myself away

Until I can mend these broken wings

At least I know

Within myself

I cannot break

What's already been broken

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

Very powerful and moving
I can tell your fed up like me

I used to always help people
but people would do me wrong
or clip my wing's if I should say

Great way of expressing your feelings

Fantastic job!!

Orlando M

[Kayleen]

cool, but can i make a suggestion? Bent sounds better than Bended. idk if you did that on purpose but Bended kind of dumbs it down. i like the rest tho