i love you

i love you

A Poem by Mariah

 

I love so many things
I love you the most
I can’t wait to see you
 
I want to hold you in my arms
Until the sun rises above the moon
 
I want to see you finally
And never let you go.
 
I know it will happen and I can’t wait
I want you so much it burns
 
I love you
And hopefully this is the last time I get hurt.

© 2008 Mariah


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I believe your true feelings wrote this poem and I see the love. I feel the tenderness through your words. Your last line is so painful and possibly shows that you are loving much more than the other person. I hope as well, that you don't get hurt anymore. Never settle for second best. I'm sure there is someone waiting to love you in the same enthusiasm in which you love!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I believe your true feelings wrote this poem and I see the love. I feel the tenderness through your words. Your last line is so painful and possibly shows that you are loving much more than the other person. I hope as well, that you don't get hurt anymore. Never settle for second best. I'm sure there is someone waiting to love you in the same enthusiasm in which you love!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eh. just not for me. First off the text was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too small i could barely read it.
And secondly...it was just a generic poem for me. sorry some poeple may like this type of poetry but i don't sorry.

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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