"Her"

This is jus hmm gloomy?? *-*

I asked Her

"Can you satisfy yourself with all my pain?

While all the time you criticised me?

What is that you thought you would gain?

Or was it just for fun?

Fun, just to play with my worthless soul?

And to see my skin turn hot red from pale-ish dun?

And to make my ravenous insecurities eat me whole?

Now, see you made me a fake.

A fake doll that smiles its life away

I had to clean my heart, clean it with a rusty rake.

I did not know where to go, I realised I just went astray.

Expiate now, for you have caused this.

Expiate, and take away my mara and my grim.

For, all that touches me is sadness with a dainty kiss.

I became everything but a' frim.

Then, she lifted her eyes

Her eyes,beautiful with countless sins.

She gave me a smile, as cold as ocean ice

And asked me "Who shooed away her own kins?"

Her gaze in the gray,in the dark black gray,

Left me done and speechless.

She gave me a look which said " Come what may"

She seemed to empty my emptiness.

She walked near me and told her name, her name under the silver candlelight.

She left me horrified with her bonnie allurement.

For she said "People call me the Lonely Knight.

And keep it a secret, because you are her,who you were meant"

Author's Note

i dedicate this to anyone who can relate to this

And by the way..The "her" is actually the person (writing this poem (me -_- ) ) inner
self *-*

Reviews

[anya]

I love this. It's beautiful and cool.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

To find the secrets and answers that lie within, the only person who can tell you right from wrong is the person on the other side of the mirror.

[TheLonelyKnight]

YEAHHHH true !!!

[B]

Waw you are only 15
You will grow to be quite a poet
A really cool one
I love the imagery here and your subtle tone
Very light on your words

Good for you ...... never stop
You got talent !!!

[TheLonelyKnight]

awwww thank you soo much!!! i REALLY appreciate you reviewing it and also reading it :)

[B]

Never stop :)

[Falcon1]

Beautiful writings here For The LonelyKnight strikes again Nice read for my first time reading your work.