Words free me from reality

uhh this is my first poem (ever) and the last part is inspired by a movie (dead pots society) and the whole thing is a bit hard to understand.. GOMEN sorry PS dis poem is abt nature and soulNO.SPAC

Sometimes, i want to do things

not meant to be done.

Sometimes i wanna do things, 

like explore a Blackhole!

But not everyone can do what they want to. Can they?

And there i was. Tasting nature 

from a waterfall. It was cold.

I think. No, it was freezing.

But was it to bother me?

Yes.

But did that?? No.

Because i savoured every moment with my Lady.

Milady waterfalls. Madonna nature.

And there i was, racing with the air 

down the Meadows.

Racing and...Flying.

Yes, i was flying...Or was i going too fast?

Voices in my head said

"slow down! you might fall!"

And i whispered back

"You are right. But i can Fly..."

And there i was 

standing on a cliff

with butterflies in my stomach.

But that fresh breeze

swept away, what was daunting me

                       I felt alive, i felt happy.

but nothing lasts forever,right?

And there i was.

In an open cage.

desperate to get out, even though it was already opened.

And i looked at my feet. I was tied to something.

It was called "a Normal Life"

A normal life, You say?

Go to school ,study hard, Graduate, Get a job and fade away, you say?

can anyone show me LIFE in that?

Then what seperates us from machines?

   Don't they both do the same?

So i called out to people,

asking them to help me.

They said nothing,

But i sure heard something...A scream.

"Help MEE!! Please!!" were the screams 

What was happening? 

Realization hit me. Everyone is suffering.

But it is up to us 

To either get depressed and morose,

or smile where ever life takes you.

                      I chose the second.

Suddenly, my tied feet were freed

And i entered a place full of words.

Someone whispered in my ears

"Carpe diem... Seize the Day. Make your life extraordinary"

Hence i contribute my verse 

And promise to suck out all the marrow of my life~

           

Author's Note

i am new -_- so no criticizing -_- i AM welcome to suggestions though..
And if u find this boring, skip to the last 4 stanzas (becuz i too find the start a bit boring xD )

Reviews

[Falcon1]

I like the mention of waterfall I visit my Daughter In Portland Oregon where there Is Waterfalls every where I enjoy taking photos of them I get to practice on water motions and flows the pictures are interesting to me.

I also like you Lines "Realization hit me. Everyone is suffering. But it is up to us. To either get depressed and morose, or smile where ever life takes you. I chose the second.

[TheLonelyKnight]

Thank you soo much ^~^ i am really glad u liked it ^~^

yeah waterfalls are awesome though B)

[Grey Evanescent]

"Go to school ,study hard, Graduate, Get a job and fade away, you say?
can anyone show me LIFE in that?"
These lines just blew me away. This piece is sooooo good for a first timer. The lines just flow with each other.

Good job for your first poem. Keep up!

[TheLonelyKnight]

OMG!!! thank you SOO much xD arigato :3 i am REALLY glad.. wow i went thru ur poems and they are WAY better than most of the poems i read online and i was lie " this guy is awesome" lol thanks again ^^ it really means something to me ^~^

[Grey Evanescent]

you're welcome and thanks! :)