i dont know xD well this title just popped up in my mind..
The lonely Knight rises In a place where no one, no longer yields their crop, In a place where no one, no longer longs to go, In a place where no one knows about, In a place where no one cares about.. That is where He rises. The Lonely Knight.
He is not a Knight who fights battles. He is a Knight who fights Hindrance. He is not a Knight who serves the King. He is a knight who serves Himself. He is not a knight who is patriotic, He is a knight who is Psychopathic.
He is a Sweetheart.He is suicidal.
But none of that matters, for He rises. The Lonely Knight
Watch. because he is Destroyer of something he does not have. Joy.
What is a lonelyknight to do does he love or is he just confused. A lonely Man In a lonely place living in a lonely house with the respect of his family and there unconditional love.
I'm Not being a fool Your a good writer I can see very intelligent and you write free spiritually Have a nice day.
Well, this knight that yerns the darkness has armor of shadows and demons, who else than that knight?
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7 Years Ago
who else?? what do u mean?
7 Years Ago
I am confused, is the lonely knight a man or a woman? Here he is a man but in the poem "Her" it is a.. read moreI am confused, is the lonely knight a man or a woman? Here he is a man but in the poem "Her" it is a woman?
7 Years Ago
well I am the lonely knight xD though i am a girl, i thought "he" would be good the the name. And th.. read morewell I am the lonely knight xD though i am a girl, i thought "he" would be good the the name. And the lonely Knight is my "Inner self" that is how i call it lol
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And in the poem "her" i thought the use of some feminism would be good because i used words like " a.. read moreAnd in the poem "her" i thought the use of some feminism would be good because i used words like " allurement, her beauty and her smile" so There i thought "she" would be good
xD
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I see, I understand now, the strength of a man and the beauty of a female.
AND if u notice, in my poem "her" there are 2 girls.. The one asking and talking in the first part i.. read moreAND if u notice, in my poem "her" there are 2 girls.. The one asking and talking in the first part is me (physically) and the LonelyKnight is my "mind/thoughts/inner self
What is a lonelyknight to do does he love or is he just confused. A lonely Man In a lonely place living in a lonely house with the respect of his family and there unconditional love.
I'm Not being a fool Your a good writer I can see very intelligent and you write free spiritually Have a nice day.
Hello ^~^ i am 15 years old really new to this kinda poetry stuff... i was inspired by a movie called dead poets society. I wanna improve my literary skills!!
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