The song for my silent room

Waking up early each morning

The silence throughout the emptiness is exploring 

Through each quite room

I hate the sound of my own sighing

My whole life seems to be bad timing 

But I promise I'll be fine

Even the silence in the room can hear me lying 

And then I ask Is it all even worth trying?

I'm not sure anymore

I'll be fine

Somewhere along the line

Yes, I'll be fine

But not for a long time

Time and another time again

I let people in

Just to leave once more

So I ask myself...

Is this what life is for?

The only thing that seems to stay

Is the silence they leave behind

And when I'm alone again

I make friends

With the quietness

But in do good time

I'll be fine

On my own

With the silence I stand alone

When the door is closed

And the emptiness fills the room

I'm all alone

Just on my own 

With the silence that fill the room  

Author's Note

This was made to be a slow, sad song. I got the idea from watching Evita

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"I make friends
With the quietness"
I do believe silence can be our friend. I enjoyed the poem. I like the delicate way you led the reader into the silence and your thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mai Marquez]

I can hear the melody the swoon of the sad song. There is so much to be accomplished in the quiet of solitude, as I'm sure that this beautiful melancholy song was born there. Girl with pen, thank you for making this music.

[SmittyJas]

Silence is golden I heard it once said. Many wonders and thoughts can roam throughout ones head. Good thoughts bad thoughts clear thoughts then your free to be the new person you wanted to be. Don't question the stillness for it comes and goes there will be other friends to fill the void you know. Just sit back and watch your emotions Grow grow grow. As you gain confidence in mind body and soul become a new person better than before on sorrow of what you have lost but what you have gained from the experience is explained.

[jennifer little]

great job on this poem its a good poem i liked it keep up the good work

[JC]

I'm sure this sad song would be uplifting to those people feeling lonely or lost, to let them know its human to feel this way sometimes. Would love to hear it done live!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem made me think about how being alone doesn't mean
one has to be lonely. I found it to be sad in some ways, but in
others, the room was comforting for me.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

"The only thing that seems to stay

Is the silence they leave behind

And when I'm alone again

I make friends With the quietness"




Very beautiful and peaceful good movie also
nicely penned.




Thank you for sharing Blessings Benita