Sweet Bitter Darkness

In the night 

I cry

Though I look alright

I feel like part of me has died

The falseness of friends

The hurt of my heart

The Pain doesn't end

My world's been torn apart'

Never by my side

Even my shadow leaves

What the darkness abides

What the light never receives

Author's Note

Looking back I haven't reached too far into my darkest side of writing. So here is just a taste of what I can do

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Almost there :) I loved this though it's quite good with a hint of sadness and dark captivating I like it :) If you want read my darker soul it might give you a slight up in the darker poeticness :) enjoy and thanks for sharing! Enjoyed the read really :)

[Roger Turgeon]

I'm always up for the dark side. Kind of a contradiction I know. It must be that I can relate....who knows. I like the image of your shadow leaving.....that's a very alone emotion.

[SmittyJas]

Sweet bitter darkness is the dark clouds over me let it rain let it rain so the sun may come out again.
Poet to poet

[Coyote Poetry]

We all have a dark side. Hard to hide sometimes. We must find the light. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daydreamer]

Is the darkness real or intentional to creative an atmosphere? The poem is really depressing!

[Girl With A Pen]

The sadness is intentional but it's just my feelings...Exaggerated

[Daydreamer]

Aww.. I see! Would love to see you around sometime :)