She No Longer Believes

She No Longer Believes

A Poem by Girl With A Pen


She no longer believes in love
With all the lies she has heard
With all the advice she gives
No one cares for love's true image anymore

Love has become a word
Not a feeling
A word that people use to get what they want

She no longer believes in love
An empty word people abuse
The concept has been destroyed
Forever is over in seconds
And love is no longer special

Can you blame her?
Blame her for giving up on the unseen?
A word that once had a meaning
Is now so abused the very word is painful

She no longer believe in love...
     Because she is me.... 

© 2014 Girl With A Pen


Author's Note

Girl With A Pen
Today I found out that I really HATE love. How can humans turn such a magical word into nothing?

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Because words are meaningless unless imbued, and in so-doing, an individual manifests something quite magical, certainly. We do this with poetry, we do.

Not everyone sheds part of themselves with each word writ, or spoken, or action they take. Do not let any of those who do not, sway you into disbelief. Focus on those that mean and feel, and do, as they are.

I enjoyed reading this, and listening to your message.

Posted 10 Years Ago


True Love is Christ dying on the cross and many
think it is them that has that love Jesus gives us that love in
our hearts Many can't forgive and allow the pain and
bitterness to change them get so caught up in hate and Revenge and
that isn't God many think it is but he only hates evil and sin he is love a
loving father many are very blind and don't know what real love is many
think Lust and Erotic and erotica is real love and putting your first partner they
married aside and find a new one is love that is lust and they don't want to fix
that relationship and think a new one is the answer to me that is the Devil leading
them to what is on the other side of the grass but god helps them find where they need to be it is in his hands from then on.



Love is loving someone even is they hate you and
you've done nothing wrong that is God love is forgiving
someone and letting it go even if it was their fault but not
accepting what they have done is right you're allowing yourself
to heal so many kill the love in themselves and that is sad.


I love no matter how much it hurts my dad was never
a Alcoholic he was an amazing dad but he is a bad Alcoholic
I for give him but I don't Excess his mistakes I forgive him for myself
and I don't let him hurt me God has strengthened my heart through the
years and I understand your pain hone it is ok to think these things there
is still love in ones in this world but they're are like Needles in a hay stack
very hard to find. :)



What I feel I know I am human and I still care
I won't allow myself to hate others I will always
show love.


Proverbs23:7 For as he thinketh in his heart, so he is:
Eat and Drink, saith he to thee, but his heart is not
with thee.


so whatever one thinks in their heart
then they are some can be bitter and Hateful and full
of pain and not want to let it go but I still had pain but
love was always in my heart it is how I thought.


And some are abused and not taught love and think
that is love it really depends we only know what we are shown but god will put love in our hearts so some times there is those that have Abuse and still show love because they are
caring sensitive and a loving gentle soul.



Do you understand does this help?


And if it isn't love I try in not say it
because the Heart can deceive us and can be evil
and only God knows our hearts and only he can hear
those silent prayers :)


Your heart knows the world is changing and it is
Hone there is more and more evil in the world without
love there is evil so many are trying to tae God out of everything.


Many allow their emotions to control them not always
good love isn't a feeling it is so much more then that Hone :)
but many let the bad Emotions control them like hate bitterness
angry the flesh I only pray and let God have control we never know what
control we will have as I am a very sensitive and caring soul.



Hope you have a Blessed night Young Thinker

Benita/ Kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


You have a sympathetic heart in me, my dear. All your questions are my own. Why are we built this way? It can be sad, even maddening. But I've resigned myself not to give up on understanding. Afterall, I will never not be human all my life; I must find significance somewhere or wither away.

Very enjoyable poem. True and important. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a very heartfelt poem. I have definitely known people who are in love with the idea of love or are in love just for the sake of being in love - they don't feel the true feelings but harbor the desire to say that they are in love. nice poem - keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


love is life, maybe for eros has disappointed many people but there still three that stand storge, agape and phileo
eros become meaningless, truth meaning of eros has be replace by desire, intercourse and many more

if you hate the love then you haven't found the true meaning of love :)

living for what you love and love what your living - bob marley

Posted 10 Years Ago



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