Moving Forward

Enchanting yet tormented eyes, unfailing love seems...

Yet you have failed me…

I found out today as I crossed your forgotten path-

The bristling and whispers of the wind,

As it tells the tales of ones ailing heart.

You left behind the traces of a dying rose and so I waited…

You found another path-one fruitful and promising.

She is quite beautiful,

Eyes of brown mystery and rosy cheeks,

Hair drifting in the wind as you whisper your familiar lies.

Tragic.

I do not envy. I wait no more.

My heart soars with open doors-no longer for one, but many.

Unleash me from your imprisoning mind. I want to be free.

Though I have stumbled across your path-

Saddened and unwilling to move forward,

Their I see that beauty lies up ahead, over the ruins of one’s love-

its time to move forward...

Author's Note

I know it isn't the best poem, but I wrote it with my heart and its golden to me. its based off something I recently found out about someone I used to... whatever you call it. this poem is about letting go and moving forward. hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I enjoyed it, Angelina. If it's golden to you, your affirmation is all that is needed, although it is a fact that we as poets can sometimes be our own worst critic. Many blessings!

[A.G.]

☺️ thank you Kelly. I agree. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

[dead letter office]

I hope for someone better for you. I wish you well in your search for someone compatible, faithful and forgiving, who sees and brings out the best in you Angelina. Based on your poems you have much to offer.

Playing the music video while reading was a nice touch.

True love is hard to be and hard to find, fortunately, I have a lovely wife. I learned to pray and asked Christ to choose for me; to make me a good mate. I was single for a long time, several prior poor relationships, then suddenly there was interest from several women. Friends introduced us... at the time I was not hopeful, but finally, things worked out.

[A.G.]

(: thank you Christos. things will fall to place. takes time and healing. i agree. thanks for your awesome review!

-Angelina

[dead letter office]

Happy to do it, let me know if you'd like me to read another poem.

[A.G.]

(: okay. i will.

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Written from heart with heartfelt words!
When you're sure there's nothing gonna be good in sticking at a relationship...let it go! Move forward.....
Whenever your heart is broken... don't ever forget you're golden...am hummin'...
Tis a great read, thanks for sharing☺!

[A.G.]

(: thank you so much Tahsin for your golden review. I could never have agreed more. its time to move forward (:

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