Fallen Angel

This is about someone who is broken.

FALLEN ANGEL

A  cold breeze

comes threw her window

She lays on her bed

Tears in her eyes.

Her beautiful Blonde hair

Covering her bright beautiful 

Hazel eyes. 

Hiding the Tears

and pain that

Fills her heart. 

She thinks she is 

not worthy.

She thinks she is not smart

She thinks she is the one to

Blame.

For the shame

and wrong that was done

To her. 

The only one person

That this beautiful Angel

Can count on 

Left her Cold and Dry

For another women

To spread his wings

To fly.

This Fallen Angel

Was once A Fallen victim 

To a cruel Cold

Player. 

Not realizing 

The man who she 

Thought would bring her 

Happiness. 

The man she thought who 

Would be her one and only

Turns out to be 

nothing more. 

Than a Lying 

cheat who uses 

Angels 

Waits till the become

A Fallen Angel. 

Once he seen the beauty

In her eyes goes out to

Darkness. 

Once he sees the Beauty

Has fallen into a million

of pieces. 

Having her heart shattered 

Into a thousand of peaces

without words that

can not describe. 

Once he sees the Light

In his Angels eyes

Goes out he leaves

With a cold smirk

On his face. 

Finally made

an accomplishment 

of making a beauty 

Fall into complete

Pain and darkness

for eternity 

leaving her with 

scars of the fact

he was the one to blame

Not this beauty angel. 

He was the one who cheated

Not this angel

She loved with all her heart

yet he took it in Vain.

Seeing how much 

A wonderful beautiful

Angel can love

yet he took it away

to make her become 

the fallen angel that

she is today. 

Author's Note

comment on what you feel no cold comments.

Reviews

[GirlOnFire]

this is really a great poem ..

Pain and darkness
for eternity
leaving her with
scars of the fact
he was the one to blame
Not this beauty angel.
He was the one who cheated
Not this angel
She loved with all her heart
yet he took it in Vain.
Seeing how much
A wonderful beautiful
Angel can love
yet he took it away
to make her become
the fallen angel that
she is today.

I really love each stanza, it have their own meaning.
I really Love this one :)

a really great nice poem :)

[Jasmine Michel'le Brown]

awe thank you very much :)

[Rosaria_V]

Just beautiful, so well written and so sweet

[Jasmine Michel'le Brown]

This is Mainly to help the broken hearted ladies :) yes it is thank you so much.

[Jasmine Michel'le Brown]

Hello Mike,

Thank you for the wonderful comment, But the fallen angel was not about me. It was just a random poem of heart I felt like typing up.
If you seen the first poem Called You & Me that one is about myself.

Fallen Angel is basically for any women who felt like they was to blame when they was not to blame for the men who hurt there heart.

[MikeV]

Sorry he turned you into a fallen
angel. on the plus, you got a beautiful
heartfelt poem out of it.