Control You

Control You

A Poem by Angelreads
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This song is about a pretty girl that makes all the guys fall into a trance. When the guys see her they fall into her command and she uses that to control them.

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You know what im talking bout'

The way that i feel about you

I cant even get it out

but i wanna control you

***Music***

 

I know where you are

I know what you do

I know who you see

cause baby i own you

 

I know what you buy

I know who's with you

You act like my guy

cause baby i control you

***Music***

 

 

Your gonna be what i want

Imma just flaunt you

gonna do everything i need

cause i control you

***Music***

 

Your everything i want

Your everything i need

Your my one and only

but baby

i control you

***Music***

© 2012 Angelreads


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This is very nice, and I'm trying to hear music in my head to go with the lyrics. The words flow nicely and I think a lot of people can relate to this situation at some point in their life. Good job and keep writing! You have a lot of potential. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Angelreads

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much. This song hit me last night and i had to share it
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