Tears

I know it's awful, but whatever.

My eyes beg me to stop crying.

My brain begs me to stop thinking.

My heart begs for a break.

Me? I beg for him. 

I beg for a friend to be there as I cry my eyes out.

I beg for someone to just listen without turning the attention to them.

I beg for a happy ending.

I beg for once, just once, to get what I want.

I'm not some silly brokenhearted girl.

This isn't a break, this is an ache.

I ache to feel his arms around me.

I ache to feel his love directed at me.

There is so much fear in my heart.

I fear you won't come back to me.

I fear that I'll never feel the way I did with you.

I fear that I'll be this way forever.

Reviews

[Sam Ryann]

I don't think this poem is awful, I think it's amazing. It's raw, I can kind of feel how you must've felt when writing this. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing, keep up the good work.
-S.R.

100/100

[Roberta]

I don't think that this is awful at all, it's brilliant.

It's very raw and as I read each word, I can feel that this must have been quite personal for you. To read something so seemingly honest, seems as if you are putting a piece of you into each stanza.

Good work, I really enjoyed it.

(:

[Angel With A Shotgun]

Thank you.

It is personal, yes. I didn't edit this poem at all, just simply wrote what came to mind and then published..

[Roberta]

Well then it's even more brilliant. I think all the best writing comes from the heart.

:)

[Angel With A Shotgun]

My heart is currently experiencing pain and heart break. It seems to be the only time I actually like my writing. Which explains why all of my poems on here are depressing...