Alone you left me.

Heartbreak and Despair.

Go ahead,

Walk away.

Break my heart,

Did you even care from the start?

These tears,

I cry.

My heart crushed,

Goodbye.

Feeling heart,

Deep down.

A fake smile,

I will not frown.

With this fake smile on my face,

I'll walk with grace.

Cringed, broken, against the wall,

All alone, I'll fall.

Because of you, 

My heart will be blue.

What the hell do I do?

I mean, I only loved you.

Author's Note

Ignore the fact that I sound like a little kid wrote this, it's one of my first poems I think.

Reviews

[schnickythep]

THIS DOES NOT SOUND LIKE A LITTLE KID. It's a little corny at the end but otherwise its simplicity is a good thing.

[Angel With A Shotgun]

Ah, corny was the word I was thinking of, too.

[schnickythep]

It's still a good poem. The cornyness (or cornytude or whatever) only comes in a little at the end.

[Angel With A Shotgun]

Thank you.(: